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이제 한국식 영어 표현은 NO!
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    ID : th***** 2024-06-18 10:53

    • Set more realistic goals and try to make every endeavour to achieve them. Never compromise with yourself that want to stay in your comfort zone.
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    ID : c9***** 2024-06-17 14:34

    • Difficulties in Making Cookies
      I found diverse recipes of cookies on internet. After then I tried many times to make cookies at home because I love cookies so much.
      During several tries, I succedded a few times, however, I failed to bake cookie many times.
      I was sad and dissapointed about that, nevertheless, I am going to try to bake cookies again and again. At the end, I’ll succeed to make cookies someday.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-06-18 13:44
    • Difficulties in Making Cookies

      X: I found diverse recipes of cookies on internet.
      O: I found diverse cookie recipes on the internet.

      X: After then I tried many times to make cookies at home because I love cookies so much.
      O: After that, I tried to make cookies at home several times because I love them so much.

      X: During several tries, I succedded a few times, however, I failed to bake cookie many times.
      O: During several attempts, I succeeded a few times; however, I failed to bake cookies many times.

      X: I was sad and dissapointed about that, nevertheless, I am going to try to bake cookies again and again.
      O: I was sad and disappointed about that; nevertheless, I will try to bake cookies again and again.

      X: At the end, I’ll succeed to make cookies someday.
      O: In the end, I’ll succeed in making cookies someday.

      Difficulties in Making Cookies

      I found diverse cookie recipes on the internet. After that, I tried to make cookies at home several times because I love them so much. During several attempts, I succeeded a few times; however, I failed to bake cookies many times. I was sad and disappointed about that; nevertheless, I will try to bake cookies again and again. In the end, I’ll succeed in making cookies someday.
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    ID : c9***** 2024-06-14 14:04

    • Effects of Apples
      In Korea, there is a saying ‘The mornig apples are golden apples’. It meas apples have many good and nice effects.
      First, apples have good quality of fiber, therefore they help to digest easily.
      Second, apples have antioxidant effacement. That’s why the cancer in our boby could be blocked.
      Last, apples have much vitamin C efficacy, so our skin is could much brighter and cleaner.
      Because apples have many good efficacies, it’s better to eat apples everyday for our health.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-06-17 14:32
    • [x] Effects of Apples In Korea, there is a saying ‘The mornig apples are golden apples’. It meas apples have many good and nice effects.
      [o] In Korea, there is a saying, ‘The morning apples are golden apples,’ meaning that apples have many beneficial effects.

      [x] First, apples have good quality of fiber, therefore they help to digest easily.
      [o] Firstly, apples contain high-quality fiber, which aids in digestion.


      [x] Second, apples have antioxidant effacement.
      [o] Secondly, apples have antioxidant properties that can help prevent cancer in our bodies.


      [x] Last, apples have much vitamin C efficacy, so our skin is could much brighter and cleaner.
      [o] Lastly, apples are rich in vitamin C, which can result in brighter and cleaner skin.


      [x] Because apples have many good efficacies, it’s better to eat apples everyday for our health.
      [o] Due to the numerous beneficial effects of apples, it is advisable to consume them daily for improved health.




      In Korea, there is a saying, ‘The morning apples are golden apples,’ meaning that apples have many beneficial effects.
      Firstly, apples contain high-quality fiber, which aids in digestion.
      Secondly, apples have antioxidant properties that can help prevent cancer in our bodies.
      Lastly, apples are rich in vitamin C, which can result in brighter and cleaner skin.
      Due to the numerous beneficial effects of apples, it is advisable to consume them daily for improved health.
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    ID : th***** 2024-06-03 12:05

    • Despite the fact we are just the smallest
      in the unthinkabke size of the universe, we should appreciate what we have and we must seize the opportunity to grow up better.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-06-07 22:12
    • (x) Despite the fact we are just the smallest in the unthinkabke size of the universe, we should appreciate what we have and we must seize the opportunity to grow up better.

      (o) Even though we are just a tiny part of the unimaginable vastness of the universe, we should appreciate what we have and seize the opportunity to grow and improve.

      FINAL:
      Even though we are just a tiny part of the unimaginable vastness of the universe, we should appreciate what we have and seize the opportunity to grow and improve.
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    ID : kn*** 2024-05-28 16:30

    • I disagree with the Essential Question: \"Anyone who speaks the language can teach the language.\" Being able to speak a language does not necessarily mean that the speaker has correct knowledge of grammar, so he might give students wrong information. In my case, I am a native Korean speaker, but I cannot tell that I have correct knowledge of Korean grammar. So, if I teach Korean to a non-Korean speaker, I might give him the wrong information and might not be able to answer his questions.
    원어민 강사 첨삭 2024-05-29 15:21
    • (X) I disagree with the Essential Question: \"Anyone who speaks the language can teach the language.\"

      (o) I disagree with the statement: \"Anyone who speaks a language can teach the language.\"

      (x) Being able to speak a language does not necessarily mean that the speaker has correct knowledge of grammar, so he might give students wrong information.

      (o) Being able to speak a language does not necessarily mean that the speaker has correct knowledge of grammar, so he might give students the wrong information.

      (x) In my case, I am a native Korean speaker, but I cannot tell that I have correct knowledge of Korean grammar.

      (o) In my case, I am a native Korean speaker, but I\'m not confident in my grammatical knowledge.

      (x) So, if I teach Korean to a non-Korean speaker, I might give him the wrong information and might not be able to answer his questions.

      (o) Thus, if I teach Korean to a non-Korean speaker, I might give them the wrong information and be unable to answer their questions.

      I disagree with the statement, \"Anyone who speaks a language can teach the language.\" Being able to speak a language does not necessarily mean that the speaker has the correct knowledge of grammar, so he might give students the wrong information. In my case, I am a native Korean speaker, but I\'m not confident in my grammatical knowledge. Thus, if I teach Korean to a non-Korean speaker, I might give them the wrong information and be unable to answer their questions.
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